Showing posts with label Red Wheelbarrow. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Red Wheelbarrow. Show all posts

Thursday, April 16, 2020

Writing 2 Class Notes -- Week 12 (April 16)

Greetings!

What a great, flexible, mostly engaged group of students.  I say "mostly" because sometimes it's hard to be sitting in the same room all day, looking at a screen, and keep paying attention.  They're doing great!  

Our Quick Write prompt inspired by National Laundry Day:  a picture of a woman in laundromat dryer.   I didn't get to hear much about what the students wrote, but they had a chance to share with one another in a Breakout Room.  (By the way, today was National Wear Your Pajamas to Work Day, which seems apropos for this quarantine season.)

For most of the semester, we've been doing Words of the Day to explore unusual words and etymologies.  Next week we will finish up this part of the class with a rollicking game of "Vocabulary Bingo."  To prepare for that, students should review the Words of the Day in order to be familiar with them. (No memorizing definitions is required.)

Following our beginning of class activities, we did a Homework Check.  On Wednesday I scanned and emailed homework that included the final drafts of their Cause/Effect or Problem/Solution essays, various worksheets, and rough drafts of their Evaluation Essays.  Students have done well in emailing their homework in.  When students hand in homework, the photos of worksheets and Quick Writes are clear enough for me to read, but not enough to be worth scanning and sending back.  When possible, I will scan work and send it back.  

The class has done a good job with the Evaluation Essay, and they are to do the final drafts for next week.  A number of students needed to expand their papers with more details about the criteria in their essays.  (See the notes that have organization options.)  The final drafts are due next week.

For the Poetry section of class, I sent students again to the Breakout Rooms to 1) choose 2 poems to discuss; 2) try to figure out why Mrs Prichard likes the poem "The Red Wheelbarrow" and 3) choose a poem to recite as a group.  While none of the groups figured out my quirky fascination for this poem, they were thoughtful and had good discussions.  Next week I will introduce our Poetry Slam -- a recitation competition.

Finally, for Grammar, I used my Aver document camera to work on two more comma-related worksheets.  (This lesson was a mix of technology and old school pen and paper.)  We've been reviewing comma usage with the Edpuzzle videos.  The worksheets I've made can be finished with Word or Google Docs.  (Note:  Some students have already done this and don't need to do it again.)

Blessings on all of you and your families.
See you next week!
Mrs. Prichard

Assignments for Next Week
-- Final Draft of the Evaluation Essay
-- Read the handout with T.S. Eliot, William Carlos Williams, and Lewis Carroll poems 
-- Grammar Worksheets:  
     -- Appositives & Parenthetical Phrases -- last 5 only 
     -- Appositives -- top half only
     -- Date &Addresses (top half only)
     -- Complements Worksheet (both sides)

Links for this Week
Class Notes
Appositives  (you will have to make a copy to complete it online)
Appositives & Parenthetical Phrases  (you will have to make a copy to complete it online)

Friday, April 25, 2014

Writing 2 Class Notes -- Week 13 (April 24)

Greetings!
We had a great class yesterday.  Beginning our class with a Quick Write, we celebrated William Shakespeare's birthday (a day late) with our own stories about "star crossed overs."  I asked them to be creative about pairing 2 unlikely candidates.  Of the stories, we had a clever, pun-filled account of a relationship between a stone wall and a window.
Our Words of the Day came from a book of common sayings and their origins.  The phrases we looked at this week were:
"Great Scott!" -- an exclamation taken from Winfield Scott, a general of the Mexican War and an arrogant, pompous presidential candidate opposing Franklin Pierce.
"Hat in the ring" -- a phrase that means to join a political race, taken from Ringstrasse, a city center in Vienna that was a gathering place for those politically involved in the city.  Gentlemen would be visible because of their hats.
"Hobnob" -- to socially mix with those of a higher class taken from the old English word that means "to give and receive."  People would gather at pubs and offer toasts to one another.
"Kit and Caboodle" -- the whole collection of things, taken from a set of tools/objects (kit) and personal items (fr. Dutch boodle)

Students handed in their Evaluation Final Drafts today, along with their self-evaluations.  I had asked the students to use the same rubric that I use to grade/score the papers.  Our next essay is a Re-Write of one of the essays that they've written for this class this year.  They might want to choose a paper that they feel needs improving or a favorite essay that they would like to work more on.
We had a a good amount of time to talk through some of our Poetry selections.  Those who had taken Writing 1, remember our class discussion about William Carlos Williams's short poem, "The Red Wheelbarrow."  While it may seem an insignificant poem, I've always enjoyed unpacking it with students.  We also looked at Carl Sandburg's poem, "Chicago," and Robert Frost's poem, "The Road Less Traveled."  We had a wonderful discussion about the ways we take the unconventional paths in life.
We're winding down our semester of classes, and part of our next two classes will be our "Poetry Jam."  Combining the ideas of a poetry slam (a competition featuring original poems) and Poetry Out Loud (a competition featuring pre-selected poems) students will read or recite poems for the class. James Stephenson, a Writing 1 student, set up a bracket for us to use.  I've divided the students into teams (please remember your number!).  They are to bring 1 - 2 poems next week.  We will take time for some team collaboration before starting.
We ran out of time to discuss the Reflection Paper that I would like them to write.  Next week, as the class's Quick Write, I will be asking them to take a longer time to write about what they've learned about writing and about themselves as writers this year.  I would like each student to take some time before class time to brainstorm their ideas about this topic.  If they would like, they can write some notes or compose a kind of prewrite that they can use to answer this.  I'm attaching a link to a scholarly article about the value of reflection as part of the learning process.

Assignments for Next Week:
-- Essay Re-write
-- Select 1 - 2 poems
-- Reflection paper brainstorming
This week's links:
Class Notes
Have a beautiful weekend!
Mrs. Prichard