Personal Commentary

Definition

            A commentary is essentially a thoughtful reaction to some aspect of life.  Similar to an editorial in which a writer attacks or applauds a specific newsworthy item, commentaries speak about some aspect of culture, society, beliefs, etc.  Unlike editorials, they are usually more even-handed and reflective.  Current affairs, trends, developments, business dealings, politics, etc. are all good source of subject matter for a personal commentary.

Thesis Statements

            Select the main point and the focus you want to convey.  Determine your opinion about this topic and craft a thesis statement that expresses it clearly.

Organization of the essay

            In an essay of this kind, you will need to give some background information, especially if it is a complicated topic.  This should be brief and give important information that will connect with the rest of your essay.  Include not only concrete details that support your thesis, but your personal opinions and the reasons behind those opinions.

Tips on Planning

– Focus your efforts.  A topic that is too broad will be hard to cover in a short essay.  Also, too many details confuse the reader.

– Present your experience or information in an engaging way so that your readers can appreciate its importance; present your ideas in an organized way.

Essay Guidelines

– Due dates:  Rough Draft due August 29; Final Draft due September 12

– Essay length:  at least 300 words (about 1 page)

– Rough drafts can be typed or hand-written, but must be double-spaced.

– Final draft format:

– Typed (if this is not possible, please let me know)

– 1 inch margins

– Name and date on the upper right hand corner

– Number the pages on the lower right hand corner

– Title centered above the text of the essay