Extended Definition Essay

Extended Definition Essay 

Definition 

In an essay of definition, you clarify a complex concept, an abstract idea, or a complicated ideal. (Ex.:  inflation, hope, democracy) As a writer, you will put boundaries around a term, concept, or idea.  To develop and extend a definition, you can give a dictionary definition, make a comparison, provide a fitting quotation, offer a negative definition (tell what it is not), and so on.  The effectiveness of your essay depends upon your ability to understand your subject, to know what really sets it apart from all other members (related ideas) in its class.  In an extended definition, your explanation will limit, distinguish, or clarify a topic. 

Thesis Development 

The thesis statement names the subject of the definition and makes it apparent that the term will be defined.  Sometimes a thesis names the class to which the subject belongs and gives the particular features or categories that sets it apart.  In addition, a thesis may reflect the writer’s purpose or attitude forward the term, concept, idea, or ideal. 

Organization 

In your introduction, you will set up the order for your paper.  In your brainstorming and pre-writing, you should come up with distinguishing characteristics for your topic.  Do these fall neatly into categories?  Consider giving examples or opinions (quotes) by experts.  The extended definition essay does not require a specific organizational structure.  You may find yourself incorporating a variety of organizational patterns. 

Tips on Writing 

• Consider giving examples, including those of what your subject is not.  Is it similar but different to something else? 
• Can your find concrete ways to explain abstract ideas?  Analogies or object lessons work well. 

Pitfalls to Avoid 

Avoid giving only the dictionary definition.  Consider including the denotations (objective perceptions) and the connotations (emotional associations) with your subject.  These can be both positive and negative. 

Avoid circular definitions.  Don’t use the term to define it.  For example, you wouldn’t define a mystery novel as something mysterious. 

Avoid oversimplification.  Dig deep into your topic. 

Essay Guidelines 

• Due dates:  Pre-Write due October 12; Rough Draft due October 24; Final due November 7 
• Essay length:  700 – 900 words (about 2 – 3 pages) 
• Rough drafts can be typed or hand-written, but must be double-spaced. 

• Final draft format:  
• Typed (if this is not possible, please let me know) 
• 1 inch margins 
• Name and date on the upper right hand corner 
• Number the pages on the lower right hand corner 

• Title centered above the text of the essay