Tuesday, December 17, 2019

Writing 2 -- Grades, Percentages, and Scores!

Greetings!

In addition to my earlier comments about grades in general, I want to clarify how I have scored and graded my students this semester.  Firstly, I've divided the work done in the class into categories:  Assignments, Writing, Grammar, and Literature.  Each category is somewhat self-explanatory, except for perhaps the "Assignments" section.  This is where I put our Quick Writes, vocabulary work, and any other class participation scores.

For the past two years I've been using My GradeBook, an online grade book.  With this program, I can assign a category to each assignment, for example, Writing, Literature, Grammar, Assignments (in-class work.)  My GradeBook figures percentages for total scores and for scores within each of these categories. 

However, the four categories used for Writing 1 did not have the same number of assignments, so a straight averaging of the scores does not give an accurate total percentage/grade.  For example, the Assignments category had 16 scores, and 15 of them were small, 5-point Quick Writes.  Writing section had fewer assignments, but the scores were higher per assignment.

Though the categories are not exactly even, I feel that dividing the scores like this is helpful because it helps parent, students, and teacher have a better picture of the work done in the semester.  For example, if a student scores 100% on this Assignments section, I know that he showed up and participated well in class.  A low score in the Literature section is most likely a sign of a significant number of missing assignments.  Likewise, a low score in grammar could be because assignments were not handed in, or it could be a lack of knowledge in this area. As it is with all homework assignments for any subject area, the scores reflect a mix of quantity and quality. 

When you get the grades, you should see a small table like this:



Assignments
Grammar
Literature
Writing
Combined
Grade
%
Grade
%
Grade
%
Grade
%
Grade
%


I hope I haven't further confused the grading for this class.  Working with students to help them develop into first-rate thinkers and writers is my  primary goal.  Points, scores, percentages, and grades are only small parts in the learning process.

Blessings to all of you,
Tammy Prichard

Writing 2 -- Grades are Coming, Fall 2019!

Dear CHAT Writing 2 Students & Parents,

I've just finished calculating the grades for the Spring semester, and you will be finding them in your inbox by the end of the week.  As tutors, these are suggested grades for you as homeschooling families to consider.

For those who are new to my classes, let me share my thoughts on grades.  As I homeschooled, I didn't give my children grades.  I felt that grades were far too subjective.  I taught my own children for mastery.  We didn't proceed with a topic until they were ready no matter how long that took.  In a class setting, knowing where each student is with regards to his/her understanding of a topic is not possible, so any grade given is not a complete representation of what the student learned or accomplished this year.

Letter grades are a funny thing.  For some students, it becomes the only motivation for doing well.  For some, it becomes a measure of their worth as a person or as an academic learner.  I personally don't like these "side effects" of the grading system.  On the other hand, grades can be a valid reflection and reward for working hard, being diligent, and understanding the materials.

When teaching students to be good writers, I give a lot of consideration for growth and improvement. Each student has a starting place; over time I look for him or her to learn the mechanics of grammar, good writing techniques, and analytical thinking skills.

For this class, I gave points for attendance, participation, short assignments, literature assignments, grammar exercises, and longer essays. (I tend to be an "easy grader" and like to see my students encouraged to do their best.)  For these essay assignments, the final drafts were graded using a rubric that divided the papers into the following categories:  focus, content, organization, and mechanics.  The grades will be divided into the following categories:  Assignments (Quick Writes and in class activities), Literature, and Writing.  A student may have been strong in one area and not in another, and this will be reflected in these categories.  The categories are not evenly weighted; in other words, 100% in Assignments, which were almost all Quick Writes, does not have the same value as 100% in Grammar, which included lots of worksheets and new material to learn.

Each student (and parents) will receive an e-mail with percentages and suggested grades for this semester.  I’ve seen each student improve with each paper.  Good Work!

Blessings,
Tammy Prichard

Links:
Writing 2 -- Grades are coming!
Grades, Percentages, and Scores Clarification

Friday, December 13, 2019

Greetings!

We began our final class with a short Quick Write to reflect on the class and on the past semester.  Research shows that reflecting on what and how you have learned enhanced meaning and encourages insight and complex understanding.  (Here's a good article on learning through reflection.)  For that reason, I have students take time to think back on the semester.  I asked them to briefly write about what worked well, what didn't work, and what one "thing" they learned (from any class) that they found amazing.  I especially value their comments about the structure of the class because these comments help me make adjustments and improvements.



We celebrated our final class with a Christmas party that included an "Ugly Christmas Sweater Design" contest and a Jeopardy game.  They were pretty intent on their designing and coloring.  The Jeopardy game included the following topics: My Antonia, Grammar, Writing, Christmas Trivia, and Christmas Movies.  By the way, research also indicates that using game-based learning strategies increases recall, retention, and cognitive growth.  So while we were having fun, we were still intellectually engaged in our topics.  In order to form teams, students were given names of songs that they had to hum in order for them to find their teammates.  Watching them walk around the classroom while humming was delightful!



Students handed in their final drafts of their Comparison-Contrast Essays.  I will go over the essays and any other homework that was handed in yesterday; my goal is to have final grades out by the end of next week.  If students are missing any work, I will take it until next Thursday.  In class we cleared up some questions about missing work and My GradeBook.  If parents or students have any more questions, feel free to contact me.

Links for this week:
Class Notes (with pictures & videos)

I've enjoyed this group of students.  Each one is uniquely gifted for the plans that God has for him/her.  Feel free to keep in touch.
Blessings, 
Mrs. Prichard

Thursday, November 21, 2019

My Antonia Project Self Evaluation Rubric


Name:  _________________________________
Description of Project

  
SELF EVALUATION
Rate yourself and your project

0
1
2
3
4
Connection to the Book
Not at all connected
Vague connection
Some connection
Good connection
Strong connection
Project Quality
No effort; no product
Weak effort; poor product
Some effort; satisfactory product
Good effort; commendable product
Exemplary effort; insightful & impressive product
Presentation
No presentation
Vague & indistinct comments
Clear but incomplete comments
Clear & thorough comments
Thought-provoking & perceptive comments




TEACHER EVALUATION
Rate yourself and your project

0
1
2
3
4
Connection to the Book
Not at all connected
Vague connection
Some connection
Good connection
Strong connection
Project Quality
No effort; no product
Weak effort; poor product
Some effort; satisfactory product
Good effort; commendable product
Exemplary effort; insightful & impressive product
Presentation
No presentation
Vague & indistinct comments
Clear but incomplete comments
Clear & thorough comments
Thought-provoking & perceptive comments

COMMENTS:

Writing 2 Class Notes -- Week 13 (Nov. 21)

Greetings!

We started the class with a Quick Write using the student ideas for the prompts:  Today we wrote on about 1) Hair styles and 2) Arrogant and annoying people.  As always, the students did some good thinking and writing.  

We didn't do any Words of the Day because I wanted to make sure that we had enough time for our presentations.

Students handed in the Rough Drafts of their Comparison/Contrast Essays along with their Pre-Writes and Rough Draft Rubrics. (Note:  If students did not hand their essays in class, they can email them as Word Documents or share them as Google docs.  I can not open documents from Apple/Mac Pages.)

We spent most of the class time enjoying the presentations of the book projects for My Antonia.  The presentations included some thoughtful artwork that connected to the book, a game, a dramatic reading, a short essay, an apron, and a movie trailer. I'm so very pleased with the work the students have done and am looking forward to finishing up our presentations after our Thanksgiving Break.

We had a few minutes at the end of class, so I pulled out an activity that I've been wanting to do that relates to the prairie/western genre.  The class was divided in half, and each group was given a poem by Marvin Hass, an old cowboy poet.  Their  goal was to figure out how to recite it, making sure every person was included.  They were marvelous.

Assignments for Next Week
-- NOTHING!

Links for This Week
Class Notes (with photos)
My Antonia Project Self Evaluation

Have a blessed Thanksgiving!
Mrs. Prichard


Saturday, November 16, 2019

Writing 2 Class Notes -- Week 12 (Nov. 14)

Greetings!

We had a good class time this week.  They usually come to class with lots of energy!

For the Quick Write prompt this week I asked students to give me a list of at least 10 prompt ideas.  We've had 11 weeks of writing these quick writes so they have an idea about the types of prompts they like.  I will take those prompts and use them for most of our Quick Writes for the rest of the year.  I had each student share one of his/her ideas.  I'm looking forward to using their ideas throughout the year.

Our Words of the Day (click here to see these words)
cattywampus -- 19th century slang; askew or disarrayed
bumfuzzle -- to confuse, perplex, or fluster
gardyloo -- an interjection yelled before throwing slops out the window; possibly from the French phrase garde a l'eau ("Attention!  Water!")

The class has been assigned a Comparison/Contrast Essay, and the rough draft and pre-writes are due next week.  Writing a clear thesis statement that includes the topic and the writer's stand on that topic can be really difficult.  Thesis statements are different from topic sentences in that they are meant to give purpose and to direct the focus of the paper.  We reviewed the elements of the introduction and did some brainstorming how to come up with that elusive thesis statement.  Along with the rough drafts and pre-writes, I want students to fill out the rough draft rubric.  This rubric can serve as a checklist for students to determine the strength of their introductions, conclusions, content, and organization.  

We had our first Book Project Presentations for My Antonia, and each one was wonderful.  David wrote a children's story about Jim and the snake, Joseph drew fresh book covers for the five sections of the novel, Julia brought yummy chocolate cookies, and Katie drew portraits of Jim and Antonia.  (see pictures in the blog!)  I'm looking forward to the next two weeks!  (Note:  some students have requested to change their projects.  That is OK.)

The upcoming presenters: 
Nov. 21
Trinity A
Annika C
Elliana & Aaron
Alyse P
Abbie Kate W
Irene S
Emma M
Laura M
Olivia R
John D.
Dec. 5
Michael & Aaron
Justin K
Eli A
Caleb K
Caralynn N
Isaac B
Sophia H
Brinna K



During the final minutes of class, we reviewed the Grammar topic of subject-verb agreement.  Basically, this means that if the subject is singular, the verb is singular.  If the subject is plural, the verb is plural.  It's a simple enough concept, but longer sentences with prepositional phrases and restrictive clauses/phrases complicated the issue.   They have two worksheets to practice.   (Note:  attached to this email is an handout explaining a little more about subject-verb agreement in case the information presented in class wasn't clear.)

Assignments for Next Week
-- Rough Draft & Pre-write of History Essay
-- Rough Draft Rubric (self-evaluation)
-- My Antonia project
-- 2 Subject-Verb Agreement worksheets

Links for This Week
Class Notes

Have a beautiful weekend!
Blessings,
Mrs. Prichard

Thursday, November 7, 2019

Writing 2 Class Notes -- Week 11 (Nov. 7)

Greetings!

This week will be a brief set of notes because I might not have access to my computer for a couple days after tonight.

The Quick Write prompt:  1)  What is the most expensive thing you own or would like to own; 2) What are your spending habits or your attitudes towards money?  Cheapskate, thrifty, frivolous, or generous.

Words of the Day:
(Go here for more information on these words)
meldrop -- a drop of mucus at the end of the nose, whether produced by cold weather, sickness or otherwise.
obelus -- the division symbol; used in dictionaries to denote variations in pronunciation
agelast -- someone who never laughs

Writing
Students handed in their final drafts (along with rough drafts.)  The next essay is a Comparison/Contrast Essay.  Although they have 2 weeks to do the pre-write and rough draft, they must have a draft of their thesis statement for class next week.

Grammar
We took a few minutes to go over compound sentences and commas.  They have 2 worksheets due next week.

Literature
We had a brief discussion about the two readings I had given them -- one from Giants in the Earth and Grapes of Wrath.  The landscape and nature descriptions are key elements to these novels.  We talked about which one was more interesting and why.  We will begin our My Antonia project presentations next week.  

Presentation Schedule:
Nov. 14
Julia H
David S
Katie O
Joseph V (?)

Nov. 21
Trinity A
Annika C
Elliana & Aaron
Alyse P
Abbie Kate W
Irene S
Emma M
Laura M
Olivia R

Dec. 5
Michael & Aaron
Justin K
Eli A
Caleb K
Caralynn N
Isaac B
Sophia H
Brinna K


Assignments for Next Week:
-- Comparison/ Contrast Essay Pre-Write
-- Comparison/ Contrast Essay thesis statement draft
-- Compound Sentences Worksheet
-- Compound Sentences & Commas Worksheet
-- My Antonia Project Presentation


Links for this week
Class Notes

Have a wonderful weekend.  It's time to get out hat and mittens!
Blessings,
Mrs. Prichard

Comparison/Contrast Essay


Definition 
In comparison and contrast essays, the writer places two subjects side by side and examines their similarities and/or differences in order to clarity the qualities of each (to inform) or to make a point (to persuade).  Comparison and contrast papers can be used independently with just similarities or differences or in combination covering both similarities and differences.  These essays are important since they allow you to show your knowledge of two subjects while analyzing the relationship between them. 


Thesis Development 
The thesis of the essay should name the subjects (A and B) and announce the focus of the contrast and comparison.  The thesis also states a general opinion but leaves the explanation of the points of comparison to the body of the essay.   For example, if the essay compares two sports, the writer’s thesis might express opinions regarding the cost, danger, difficulty, etc. of the one sport compared to the other.  A thesis also might deal with surprising similarities between two seemingly different subjects. 


Organization 
Essays that compare and contrast two subjects use either a subject-by-subject or a point-by-point structure.  In a subject-by-subject structure, the writer describes one subject first and then moves on to the second subject.  In such a structure, the writer would discuss everything about subject A before moving on to discuss subject B.  This structure results in larger blocks devoted to each subject. 
In a point-by-point structure, the writer organizes his or her writing around specific points of similarity or difference between the two subjects, so each subject is discussed in relation to a point o similarity or difference.  This structure results in both subject A and B being discussed within a paragraph. 

 EXAMPLES 
Subject-by-Subject Pattern 
  1. Introduction 
  1. Subject A 
  1. Point #1 
  1. Point #2 
  1. Point #3 
  1. Point #4 
  1. Subject B 
  1. Point #1 
  1. Point #2 
  1. Point #3 
  1. Point #4 
  1. Conclusion 
* Note:  The points for Subject A and Subject B correspond. 

Point-by Point Pattern 
  1. Introduction 
  1. Main Point #1 
  1. Subject A 
  1. Subject B 
  1. Main Point #2 
  1. Subject A 
  1. Subject B 
  1. Main Point #3 
  1. Subject A 
  1. Subject B 
  1. Main Point #4 
  1. Subject A 
  1. Subject B 

Tips on Writing 
  • Select the subjects for your comparison/contrast with a purpose and audience in mind.  Consider why and how you plan to bring these two topics together. 
  • Are you trying to help your reader understand the topics more thoroughly or are you trying to persuade your reader of something? 
  • List similarities and differences in your subjects before planning your structure and outline. 
  • Decide if your subjects share more similarities or differences.  You will want to choose carefully what aspects you will emphasize so that your reader has a clear impression and understanding. 


Pitfalls to Avoid 
Avoid obvious comparisons.  It’s not very interesting to hear what you already know, so try examining similarities or differences that aren’t obvious. 
Avoid incomplete comparisons. A comparison that does not discuss the same elements for both topics would confuse your reader. 
Avoid confusing comparisons.  If the writer shows only the similarities, the reader will wonder if the two subjects are identical.  If the writer shows only differences, the reader might wonder why they are being compared. 

Essay Guidelines 
  • Due dates:  Pre-Writing due November 14Rough Draft due November 28Final Draft due December 12.  
  • Essay length:  800 – 1000 words (at least 2 ½ pages) 
  • Rough drafts can be typed or hand-written, but must be double-spaced. 
  • Final draft format:  
  • Typed (if this is not possible, please let me know) 
  • 1 inch margins 
  • Name and date on the upper right hand corner 
  • Number the pages on the lower right hand corner 
  • Title centered above the text of the essay