Thursday, December 17, 2015

The Twelve Days of Vacation


On the first day of Christmas Vacation, my mother gave to me ----

a coupon for a broom to clean my room!

'Twas the Night Before Christmas -- PowerPoint

'Twas the Night Before Christmas" Mad Libs, part 2

‘Twas the night before Christmas and all through the (noun),
not a creature was stirring, not even a/an (noun).
The (plural noun) were tucked, all snug in their (plural noun),
while visions of (adjective) plums danced in their heads.
Then up on the (noun) there arose such a clatter.
I sprang from my (noun) to see what was the matter.
It was St. Nicholas with his little (adjective) belly,
That shook when he laughed like a bowl full of (plural noun).
He spoke not a word, but went straight to his work
And filled all the (plural noun), then turned with a jerk.
And laying his (noun) aside of his nose
And giving a nod, up the (noun) he rose.
I heard him exclaim as he (past tense verb) out of sight,
“(adjective) Christmas to all, and to all a good night!”

Word of the Day -- Final Test



A.      Match the words from the Words of the Day list with its synonyms.



Forsooth                 Hysteria
Frenzy                    Unchangeable
Prevail                    Overcome
Blatherskite             Wise
Immutable               Truly
Sapient                   Chatterbox



B.      Circle the correct answer to complete the sentence



1.        A soldier wearing a morion is protecting  
a.       his foot.
b.       his elbow.
c.       his thigh.
d.       his head.

2.        The biddable maiden was known to be
a.       a great auctioneer.
b.       short and sassy.
c.       docile and obedient.
d.       always hungry.


3.        The aged abbot was employed by   
a.       a church.
b.       a bakery.
c.       a nanny.
d.       a school.


4.       The gaudiest dress was
a.       excessively showy.
b.       elegant.
c.       boring.
d.       plain and simple

5.       The pesky brother liked to tease and _____________ his big sister.
a.       snuggle with
b.       nettle
c.       sing to
d.       comfort

6.       The people heard ________ coming from the calliope.
a.       a bark
b.       laughter
c.       music
d.       birds

7.       The angry King _______ his enemies.
a.       kissed
b.       tickled
c.       smote
d.       decorated

8.       The offensive and disgusting dump was
a.       meditative.
b.       charitable.
c.       benevolent.
d.       noisome.




C.     Fill in the blank with the missing words of the sentence.


1.        An expression of regret or sorrow is “  _______________.”
2.       A person’s name that is peculiarly appropriate to an occupation or quality is an  _____________________.
3.       A thin piece of bread or toast spread with cheese is a  ____________________ .
4.       A knight might wear a ________________________ to protect himself.
5.       Hank was not a magician but a __________________ mortal.
lackaday           canape              hauberk            aptronym          mere



D.      True or False

________  1.  Dancers must have a lot of rheumatism to be successful.
________  2.  A person who has more than enough to eat and drink is living in privations.
________  3.  A public affair or issue is considered res publica.
________  4.  A camarilla is a group of clowns.
________  5.  A restaurateur owns a car rental agency.



E.      Match the words with their word origins.



Immutable                     Latin, gaudere, to rejoice
Gaudiest                       Greek, kallos “beauty” and opos “voice”
Canape                         Latin, praevelere, to have greater power
Calliope                        Old English, biddan,  to beg or ask
Sapient                         Latin, sapiens, wise
Prevail                          Latin,  immutabale, unchanging
Biddable                       Latin, canapeum, mosquito net


Sunday, December 13, 2015

Writing 2 Class Notes -- Week 14 (December 10)

Greetings!

We had a wonderful class this, especially considering part of the class time was spent taking a test.

Before taking the test, the students did a Quick Write.  December 10, 1896 was the day that Alfred Nobel died.  He became the benefactor for the awards for the various Nobel Prizes.  I asked the students to write about their favorite scientific advancements or inventions.  

Following our Quick Write, we went right away to the Parts of Speech test.  The first page of the test was identical to the pre-test they took before the student presentations. They worked hard and finished fairly quickly.

When they finished their tests, we discussed the rough drafts of the Comparison/Contrast Essays. Often when I hand back rough drafts I go over common errors that were made by the students.  Many of these errors were comma related.  I gave them the rubrics that I will use to evaluate the Final Drafts of the essays.  When they finish their final drafts for next week, they are to evaluate their own essays using these.  

Next week the students will take the Words of the Day test next week.  Attached is the list for them to use to review.  As I told them in class, the test will be a mix of multiple choice, true/false, fill-in-the-blank, and matching questions.  If they go over the words  and are familiar with them they will do well.  They don't need to feel that they should have them perfectly memorized.

Finally, I traditionally use the last week of class for a party, following the Words of the Day test, of course.  I have some Christmas writing activities for us to do.

Assignments for Next Week:
-- Final Draft of Comparison/Contrast Essay
-- Rubric/ Self Evaluation for essay
-- Review Words of the Day

Links for this Week:

Have a great week!
See y'all on Thursday!
Mrs. Prichard

Words of the Day List

Week 1
apatronym -- a person's name that is peculiarly appropriate to his/her occupation or character traits.  

Week 2
forsooth -- fr. Ole English, sooth, truth -- truly, verily (a comment or response)
morion -- fr. Old French & Spanish morro, round -- an open helmet from 16th/17th century
nettle -- fr.Old English, netele, stinging plant -- to irritate or provoke

Week 3
Blatherskite -- fr. mid-17th century English -- a person who talks at great length without making much sense
Biddable -- fr. Old English; biddan, to beg or ask -- meekly ready to accept and follow instructions; docile and obedient
Lackaday-- fr.late 17th century expression, "a lack a day"  -- an expression of regret, sorrow, dismay

Week 4
frenzy -- fr. Middle English -- a state or period of uncontrollable excitement or behavior
hauberks -- fr. Middle English/Old French/Frankish -- a long defensive shirt extending to the knees
smote -- fr. Middle English/ Old English -- to strike or hit with hands or a weapon

Week 5
prophylactic-- fr. Greek -- adj.  describing something used to protect from disease
immutable—fr. Latin,  immutabile (unchanging) -- unchanging, unchangeable over time
profane-- fr. profanus (outside the temple) -- characterized by irreverence or contempt for God or sacred principles or things; irreligious.

Week 6
abbott -- fr. Middle English -- a man who is the superior in a church
rheumatism-- fr. Latin, fr. Greek -- any disorder of the extremities, especially back and legs
mere -- fr. Middle English -- to be nothing more, nor better than.

Week 7
prevail --fr. Latin, praevelere, to have greater power -- to prove more powerful than opposing forces; to be victorious
privations -- fr. Latin, privat, deprived; fr.M.E. -- a state in which things that are essential for human well-being such as food and warmth are scarce or lacking

Week 8 -- No Words

Week 9
noisome -- fr. Middle English noy (a variant of annoy) -- offensive or disgusting, as an odor  
gaudiest -- fr. Latin, gaudere, "to rejoice" -- brilliant or excessively showy
sapient -- fr. Latin, sapiens, "wise"  -- having or showing great wisdom

Week 10
res publica -- Latin, res, "thing," and publica, "of the public" -- a public affair, of or belonging to the state or commonwealth
res non verba -- Latin, res, "thing," non, "not," verba, "words" --  deeds, not words
restaurateur -- French restaurater fr. Latin restaurator, "restorer" -- the owner or manager or a restaurant

Week 11 -- No Words
Week 12 -- No words

Week 13
calliope-- fr. Greek, combining kallos "beauty" and opos "voice"  -- a steam-powered pipe organ
camarilla--fr, Spanish, camarilla, "a small room" -- a clique, a group of scheming advisors

canape -- fr. Latin, canapeum, "mosquito net;" fr. French, canape "a sofa" -- a thin piece of bread or toast or a cracker spread with cheese

Essay Rubric for Writing 2

Criterion
Beginning (0 - 2)
Developing (3 - 5)
Competent  (6 - 8)
Advanced (9 - 10)
Focus:  Thesis, Introduction, Conclusion
Specific topic is unclear and no statement of an opinion or a stand.

No introduction.

No conclusion.
Thesis statement expresses the topic but not an opinion or a stand.

Weak introduction that states the topic but is missing a clear thesis. The focus of the paper is unclear.

Conclusion does not fully summarize the main points nor restates the thesis statement.

Thesis statement includes the topic and expresses a stand or opinion.

Introduction states topic and thesis and gives direction to the paper.


Conclusion reiterates main points and restates the thesis statement.
Clearly-stated, thoughtful & compelling thesis statement.

Strong introduction with a thesis statement that grabs attention and directs the course of the essay.

Strong conclusion that summarizes the main points and restates the thesis statement.  Satisfactorily wraps up the essay.

Content
No major points to support the thesis are included. 

Few details have been used.
Ideas are disconnected.
Some of the major points are covered.

Some specific details are included. Lacks sufficient material to fully support thesis.
All major points are covered.

Appropriate details are included with each point.
All major points are thoroughly and insightfully discussed.

All points are fully supported with strong details.

Organization
Ideas are arranged randomly.  There may be no division of paragraphs.
Like ideas are grouped together, and paragraphs are present, but ideas within may not be organized logically. 

Transitions may be lacking.
An apparent progression of ideas that allows the reader to move through the text without confusion.

Sentences with paragraphs are organized and flow smoothly
Expresses a clear, logical sequence of ideas within paragraphs and throughout the paper.

Sentences within paragraphs flow smoothly with good use of transitions.

Mechanics
Frequent errors, seriously impairs flow & meaning of paper
Errors noticeable, and occasionally detract from flow or meaning of paper

Some errors, which are minor in nature and don’t detract from overall meaning of paper
Essentially faultless; errors may result from risk-taking and do not detract from meaning of paper. 



Total Score – 40 possible points

Tuesday, December 8, 2015

Writing 2 Class Notes -- Week 8 (October 22)

Greetings!
Here's the briefest Class Notes you'll probably ever get from me.  I've been in a grading frenzy this week with papers from all of my students in all of my classes at both schools. Over 80 papers have needed my attention!

Assignments for THIS week:
Extended Definition or Classification Essay Rough Draft
Read Ch. 37 - 41 of A Connecticut Yankee
Answer 3 Study Guide Questions and do 5 Vocabulary Words
Verbs Presentation -- Corey, Faith, Abby

Friday, December 4, 2015

Writing 2 Class Notes -- Week 13 (December 3)

Greetings!

As always, our class time was productive and enjoyable!

Our Quick Write this week was more on the thought-provoking side than the light-hearted side.  December 1 marks the day when Mrs. Rosa Parks, and African-American, got on a bus in Montgomery, Alabama and refused to give up her seat for a white man.  This provoked a lengthy boycott of the city buses, which eventually caused some segregation laws to be changed. I gave the students 3 options for writing:  1) What is something that they would consider boycotting; 2) What is something they would protest; or 3) What is on their Christmas list.  

Our Words of the Day:
calliope-- fr. Greek, combining kallos "beauty" and opos "voice"  -- a steam-powered pipe organ
camarilla--fr, Spanish, camarilla, "a small room" -- a clique, a group of scheming advisors
canape -- fr. Latin, canapeum, "mosquito net;" fr. French, canape "a sofa" -- a thin piece of bread or toast or a cracker spread with cheese

This is the last of our Words of the Day for this semester.  The Words of the Day Test will be on Week 15 (December 17).

A large portion of the class was spent reviewing the 8 Parts of Speech.  The students did a good job with their projects and in presenting to the class. Next week is the Post-Test.  I've put on the blog and attached with this e-mail a Study Guide and Practice Worksheets.  I projected the worksheet on the whiteboard and had students work as a class to review.

A reminder:  Writing 2 is a year long class, but you must register for each semester.  The registration for the Spring Semester is now open.

Assignments for Next Week:
-- Review the Parts of Speech

Links for this Week:
Class Notes

Have a great weekend!
Mrs. Prichard

Parts of Speech Review Worksheets

NAME:  ___________________________________________

Interjections Practice
Underline the interjections in the following sentences:
1.        Aww, look at the cute kitten.
2.       I missed the bus.  Oh well.
3.       Oops!  She dropped that expensive dish.
4.       Whoa, you need to slow down.
5.       No, there is no homework tonight.

Verbs Practice
Underline the verbs in the following sentences.
1.       Our work has become harder this year.
2.       Elizabeth looked everywhere for her homework.
3.       This plant looks dead.
4.       Mrs. Jones called the doctor.
5.       Her son is sick.

Fill in a verb for each of the following sentences:

1.       Jane __________________ the cake yesterday.

2.       My muscles __________________ after gardening.

3.       The police man  _____________________ the speeding driver.

4.       The little boy ___________________ in the river.

5.       Northfield __________________ my home.
Adjectives Practice
Underline the verbs in the following sentences.
1.       My ancient grandfather wrote an insightful book about his long time as a cattle rancher.
2.       The woman’s new wool coat sold for fifty dollars at the neighborhood discount store.
3.       The tangy red ketchup on the grilled hamburger dripped on the clean picnic table cloth.
4.       This smelly garbage in my uncle’s car is gross and disgusting.
5.       My amazing essay was read by some appreciative students.



Fill in adjectives for each of the blanks in the sentences below.
1.       My _____________________ book is both ______________  and  ___________________.

2.       The _________________, ____________________ kitten slept on the _______________ blanket.

3.       The ___________________________ weather ruined my ________________________ trip.

4.       My __________________________ sailboat on the _______________________ lake was 

_________________.

5.       The __________________________ student in the _______________________ class studied for the

_______________________ test.



Conjunctions Practice
Circle the coordinating conjunctions in the sentences below.

1.       I bought four books, for I love to read.

2.       I have many bookshelves, and I love to fill them with new and used books.

3.       My sister doesn’t read many books, nor does she own as many as I do.

4.       I offered to give her some books, but she didn’t want any.

5.       I will give my extra books to the library, or I might donate them to the school.




Circle the subordinating conjunctions in the following sentences.

1.       Because we bought too many books, our bookshelves are full.

2.       I will give some to you if you ask nicely.

3.       Whenever I get rid of books, I usually feel a little sad.

4.       My house will be cleaner after I get rid of these 20 boxes of books.

5.       Although I try to stay away from book stores, I can’t help it.










Adverbs Practice
Underline the adverbs in the following sentences.

1.       The horse raced speedily around the very crowded racecourse.

2.       The man next to her coughed annoyingly all through the performance today.

3.       Katherine accidentally deleted her files.

4.       We silently watched the amazingly beautiful sunset.

5.       We will all take that infuriatingly difficult test tomorrow.


Fill in adjectives for each of the blanks in the sentences below.

1.       The boy ran ______________________________ 

2.       Jackson  ______________________________  finished his homework.

3.       I  ______________________________  drove to the store.

4.       Corey ______________________________  handed in his essay.

5.       The team  ______________________________   played the game.



Prepositions Practice
Put the prepositional phrases in parentheses and underline the prepositions in the following sentences.

1.       The book of pictures on the shelves is my favorite.


2.       Before lunch I had a meeting of student writers.

3.       The man in the yard threw the ball over the fence.

4.       I ate the cookie with chocolate chips.

5.       She was humming during the lecture about physics.

Fill in prepositions for each of the blanks in the sentences below.

1.       The muffin _____________ the table is mine.

2.       I put the box ___________________ the chair.

3.       The horse ran ___________________________  the road.

4.       My papers fell ____________________  my desk.

5.       She sat ______________________ the fireplace.






Pronouns Practice
Underline the pronouns in the following sentences.

1.       Sally, your mother needs you to call her.

2.       Steve brought his own lunch because he is allergic to most foods.

3.       I have strong opinions, but my sister doesn’t agree with them.

4.       The amazing performance brought the crowd to its feet.

5.       You can tell her because she will keep it a secret.