Friday, February 19, 2021

Writing 2 Class Notes -- Week 5 (February 18)

 Greetings!


We had a delightful class this week.  Our class time was quite full.

We started with a Quick Write, and today they had 5 options (4 of which came from their own ideas): Tell what your favorite Disney character is; tell which you prefer, Marvel or D.C.; what would be better to live in, a tree house, a hobbit hole, or under water: what is that one product that you will not compromise quality for; or whatever else is on your mind.  I had a lot of homework to hand back, so they students had a lot of time to write.

Our Words of the Day came from Nalani, Ellie, and Maddy today.  As I put the words on the board, I asked the class to make up definitions for the words. Some of them had some pretty creative definitions
etymology-- fr. Greek etymon, "true sense" and logia, "the study of" --  studying the underlying semantics and meanings of words
gubbins-- from obsolete old English, gobbon, raw fish or flesh -- a foolish or futile person; the parings or refuse from a fish
gobbledygook-- first recorded in 1940/1945; a fanciful form of gobble -- language characterized by circumlocution and jargon


While the students were writing for their Quick Writes, I handed back homework; we usually do a short Homework Check after these beginning of class activities.  This week, I reminded them of my late homework policy.  I give students three weeks to get assigned work in (actually, they have 4 weeks from the assigned date until I will no longer take it.)  After that extended time, assignments will be given zeros.  I also explained that while I don't have a specific day for correcting homework, I correct homework all at once and don't check and re-check Google Classroom for late assignments.  If homework is handed in on time, it will automatically be included when I correct homework.  If it is late, it could be included, or it might not be.  Most weeks, I will enter scores on Track My Grades.  (Another reminder, you can check to see if you are missing on any homework on Google Classroom, but you need to use your chatclasses email. And a further reminder -- if you handed in an assignment in class, leave the assignment on Google Classroom alone.  I will go through and mark as finished.)

Students handed in the final drafts of their Mystery Stories, and  I'm really excited about reading these because their rough drafts were so good!  As a reminder, they should hand in their rough drafts with my marks/corrections when they hand in the final drafts.  The final drafts could be handed in during class or uploaded to the Google Classroom assignment.  

When we finish one paper, we start another.  For the next round of essays,  students can choose to write a Cause/Effect Essay or a Problem/Solution Essay. For the both of these essays, the writer usually chooses to focus the bulk of his/her attention on one part of this 2-part essay.  Students have the next two weeks to do their brainstorming and research.  The pre-writes and rough drafts should be handed in on March 11. 

We have finished our Sherlock Holmes book, and the students wrote an essay exam in which they define "hero" and then explain if Sherlock Holmes is a hero.  As it happens every year, the class was divided in their opinions.  I had the class separate into Hero/Not a Hero groups and told them to come up with their top 5 strongest points to support their position.  (We had a little bit of a debate, that probably would have been better if we could have hear one another better.  The concrete walls and masks muddies a lot of the voices.)  At any rate, they had done some careful thinking about the sides that they chose.

We are now starting into our next book, which is a collection of Short Stories.  The class is to read the Russian authors for our next class time and to fill out the worksheet that I gave them.

At the end of class, I gave a very brief Grammar  "power lesson" about the commas that follow introductory elements.  These elements can include interjections, personal addresses, prepositional phrases, and dependent clauses.  We finished a few in class, and they are to complete the worksheet for our next class time. 

I want to commend this class in its ability to take down the room every week.  Because we're the last class to meet in our room, the students have to fold the tables and take them to another room down the hall.  Then they have to load all of the folding chairs onto a rack.  They always do it with cheerful attitudes, and I'm so grateful for their work!

A reminder -- we don't have class next week ; the next time we see one another will be March 4.

Assignments for March 4


Links for This Week
Class Notes

Have a good weekend and a wonderful week off!
Blessings,
Mrs. Prichard




Tamera M. Prichard

Thursday, February 11, 2021

Writing 2 Class Notes -- Week 4 (February 11)

 Greetings!


We had an fun class today -- we covered a lot of material,  We started with our Quick Write.  As I told them last week, the plan was to write letters of encouragement and gratitude to someone.  I also gave them 2 other options.  They could write a "literary love letter" to some aspect of writing or literature, or they could write a "love letter" to a person or some thing that they love.  Because I think it is really important to write real letters and send them in the mail, I'm offering extra credit to those who do that.  For those who wanted the extra credit, they wrote their letters, put them in sealed envelopes, and handed them in.  If need be, they can bring the addresses next week if they forgot to bring them today.  I will mail them.

We didn't have any Words of the Day because I wanted to make sure that we had enough time for other activities.  

I handed back the rough drafts of the Mystery Stories.  These were amazing!  I found myself thinking of the plots and characters long after reading and correcting them.  Many students wrote more than they usually did, and they were pretty creative.  As per my practice, I go over common mistakes as part of our rough draft discussions and use these for grammar instruction.  The most common errors I found in their write had to do with punctuating dialogue, paragraph formation, comma splice sentences, and compound sentences with commas.  Students are to revise their rough drafts into final drafts for next week. Ask you student to share his/her story with you. 

We've now finished our 6 short stories of Sherlock Holmes and Dr. Watson.  To round out this literature unit, students are to write an essay exam in which they address the question, "Is Sherlock Holmes a Hero?"  They must first define what a hero is and then apply their definition to Sherlock Holmes.  We had NO discussion on these points because I want students to give me their own original ideas.  Usually we had a debate-like discussion after this assignment, so I look forward to that next week.

We discussed how, as any detective is solving crimes, it is important to be able to tell if someone is lying or not.  To that end, I handed out playing cards to each of the students, and 4 of them received an Ace, indicating that they were the Liar.  They were all to mingle and tell one another about something that they had done this year during the pandemic.  Everyone was to tell the truth except for the 4 "Liars."  At the end of this activity, student shared whom they thought were the liars.  Oddly enough 2 of the actual liars did not even make it on the list.  I wonder if this would have turned out differently if the students had not been wearing masks.  

I gave them their next book, Great Short, Short Stories, but we will hold off on reading any of the stories until after the Essay Exam.  

Our Grammar instruction centered again on dependent and independent clauses.  In our focus on commas, we are also learning a lot about sentence structures.  We took time to work  on the homework for next week so that students could work together and ask questions.   Students have 2 sides of one worksheet to do for next week.

A note on homework:  last week with 46 rough drafts from Writing 1 and Writing 2, I only corrected student papers.  The other grammar and literature homework will be graded and entered into Track My Grades this week. Again, if you are not able to get into Track My Grades, let me know.  We discovered today that I had the wrong email entered for one student, and I was able to correct it.

Assignments for next week
  • Mystery Story Final Draft

  • Sherlock Holmes Final Exam

  • Spring Writing Survey

  • Grammar:  Wk4 - Identifying Independent/Subordinate Clauses

  • Grammar:  Wk4 - Writing Independent/Subordinate Clauses


Links for This Week
Class Notes


Have a great weekend!
Blessings,
Mrs. Prichard


Tamera M. Prichard

Saturday, February 6, 2021

Writing 2 Class Notes -- Week 3 (February 4)

Greetings!

We started our class thinking about "Gratitude."  I shared with the class that research shows that people who develop intentional habits of expressing gratitude have stronger cognitive functioning, better immune systems, and a greater degree of happiness.  For our Quick Write prompts today, students could choose from these options:  
  • What is a simple pleasure that you are grateful for?
  • What is something that you are looking forward to?
  • Who is someone who could really use a "thank you note?"
The students had some great comments, and we decided that next week we would write some real thank you notes.  I will bring envelopes and stamps and the students are to bring addresses.  (What a great group this is!!)

Our Word of the Day came from Ethan:
apocalypse-- fr. Greek apokalupsis, "to uncover or reveal" -- something viewed as prophetic revelation; a revelation; also something perceived as catastrophic

For class this week, we had extras on Zoom due to the bad roads. We had enough on Zoom to make a small group for our literature discussion

Students have handed in the Pre-Writes and Rough Drafts of their Mystery Stories.  Most of them enjoyed writing these, and many felt that they wrote more than they usually wrote.  This kind of writing required some different planning and a different kind of thinking.  I am looking forward to curling up with a cup of coffee and reading my pile of Mystery Rough Drafts.  

We are 4 stories into our book of Sherlock Holmes mysteries, and the consensus this week was that the "Speckled Band" was more interesting than "The Engineer's Thumb."  Most agree that there was something satisfying about following clues and deducing solutions.  Someone mentioned the "red herrings" in the story about the speckled band.   These false clues and distractions add another layer of interest.

For the Grammar portion of class, we worked again on complex sentences.  In our unit on Commas, we also need to learn about sentence structures.  You won't understand where the comma goes with regards to dependent clauses in complex sentences if you don't know what a complex sentence is.  You won't know the difference between an independent and dependent/subordinate clause if you don't understand what the essential elements of a sentence are.  All of grammar is interconnected, and the students are doing a great job at working to understand these intricacies.  

Assignments for Next Week:
  • Spring Writing Survey (This is a Google Form on Google Classroom. It is not due for 2 weeks, but students can do it right away if they would like)

  • Holmes:  Read “The Final Problem” & “The Adventure of the Empty House"

  • Characterization of Sherlock Holmes (Students can do this on the document attached to the Google Classroom assignment OR they can print it and do it with pen/highlighter on paper.)

  • Grammar:  Wk3 - Complex Sentences & Commas

  • Grammar:  Wk3 - The Complex Sentence

 
Links for This Week
Track My Grades (note -- if you can not find your password in the email sent to you, please let me know.)
Class Notes
The Final Problem (audiobook on YouTube)
The Final Problem (video with Jeremy Brett)
The Adventure of the Empty House (audiobook on YouTube)
The Adventure of the Empty House (video with Jeremy Brett)



Tamera M. Prichard
Writing Instructor at CHAT