Saturday, April 16, 2016

Sentence Review


Complete Subjects and Complete Predicates


A complete subject is the subject with all of its modifiers.
A complete predicate is the verb with all of its modifiers.
                        Complete Subject             Complete Predicate
EX:  Most of the students | went on vacation over the long weekend.


 

Simple Subject and Simple Predicate


A simple subject is the subject without its modifiers.
A simple predicate is the verb without its modifiers.
                                            S           V           
EX:  Most of the students | went on vacation over the long weekend

 

 

Exercise #1:  In the following sentences, draw a line between the Complete Subject and the Complete Predicate.  Underline the simple subject once and the simple predicate (verb) twice.  Label S for Subject and V for Verb.  Put all prepositional phrases between parentheses.

                    S           V                
EX:   Williamsburg | is a restored colonial town (in Virginia.)
                                    

1.      At this tourist attraction, costumed guides show visitors around their town.
2.      In the springtime, gardens are filled with daffodils and tulips.
3.      Hungry tourists enjoy dinners in candle-lit taverns and restaurants.
4.      In 1765, Patrick Henry delivered his famous speech in the Williamsburg Capitol.
5.      English colonists chose the site for its good soil drainage and pleasant climate.
6.      At first, residents call the colony Middle Plantation.
7.      Later, colonists renamed the town Williamsburg in honor of King William III.
8.      John D. Rockefeller, Jr., supported the town’s restoration during the 1920s.
9.      A historic plantation is located just outside Williamsburg.
10.  Even the streets are brick and cobblestone instead of modern asphalt.

Compound Subjects and Predicates


A compound subject is composed of two or more simple subjects.
                                               S                 S            V
            EX:  Most of the students and teachers went on vacation over the long weekend.    

A compound predicate is composed of two or more simple predicates.
                                             S           V                                 V
            EX:  Most of the students went on vacation and relaxed over the long weekend.      

Exercise #2:  In the following sentences, draw a line between the Complete Subject and the Complete Predicate.  Underline the compound subject once and the compound predicate (verb) twice.  Label S for Subject and V for Verb.  Put all prepositional phrases between parentheses.  Do not underline any conjunctions or modifiers.

                                                 S                          S              V
                             EX:  Companies and corporations | sell shares to stockholders.

1.      Stocks usually increase or decrease in value over time.
2.      Profits and losses by a company affect its stock’s value.
3.      Good times and good management increase a stock’s value.
4.      Bad management hurts or sometimes destroys a company.
5.      Stockbrokers check prices and make trades for buyers.
6.      Millionaires and ordinary people trade stocks worth million dollars.
7.      Prosperity and rising prices bring about a bull market.
8.      New York and Tokyo are sites of stock exchanges.
9.      Investors still want and need the help of stockbroker now.
10.  On any given day, the price of a stock rises or falls.







Subject Complements

Linking Verbs—such as be, appear, become, feel, grow, seem, smell, sound, and taste—always need a subject complement to complete their meaning in a sentence.

There are two kinds of complements: predicate nominatives (nouns that follow linking verbs) and predicate adjectives (adjectives that follow linking verbs).

            Predicate nominatives rename, identify, or refer to the subject of the sentence.
                        Those people are tourists. (predicate noun)
                        This magazine is mine. (predicate pronoun)

            Predicate adjectives modify the subject of a sentence.
                        The food is spicy. (predicate adjective)
           
            Predicate nominatives and predicate adjectives can be compound.
                        Those people are tourists and explorers.  (compound predicate nominative)
            The food is spicy and hot. (compound predicate adjective)

Exercise #3:  In the following sentences, underline the subject once and the verb twice.  Label S for Subject and V for Verb.  Circle the subject complements, labeling predicate nominatives PN and predicate adjectives PA.

Put all prepositional phrases between parentheses.



1.      The author C. S. Lewis has been an amazing writer and teacher.
2.      The main characters in his books are two brothers and two sisters. 
3.      The central character is Aslan, a lion.
4.      Aslan is not at all tame.
5.      Lucy, the youngest sister, seems adventurous.
6.      The oldest brother seems at times bossy.
7.      Edmund is the younger brother.
8.      Mr. Tumnus, Lucy’s first friend in Narnia, is afraid of the White Witch.
9.      The Beavers are life savers for the Pevensy children.
10.  An empty wardrobe can be an amazing place.


Thursday, April 7, 2016

Sentence Structures


    A simple sentence contains one subject and one predicate. It expresses one main idea. Parts of the sentence, however, may be compound.

            The line is busy now.

  
A compound sentence is made up of two simple sentences that express related ideas. These sentences are connected by a semicolon or by a comma and a coordinating conjunction. A semicolon that connects two simple sentences may be followed by a conjunctive adverb.

            The line is busy now, but I will try again later.

 
A complex sentence contains one main clause and one or more subordinate clauses. The subordinate clauses may be used as adverbs, adjectives, or nouns. A complex sentence expresses one main idea and one or more dependent ideas.

            Although the line is busy now, I will try again later.


    A compound-complex sentence contains two main clauses and one or more subordinate clauses. The subordinate clauses may be adverb, adjective, or noun clauses. A compound-complex sentence expresses two main ideas, as well as one dependent idea.

            The line is busy, but I will try again when I finish this.

  
A compound-complex sentence consists of two or more main clauses and one or more subordinate clauses. It may help you to think of a compound-complex sentence as a compound sentence plus a subordinate clause. Actually, the compound-complex sentences join two sentences, at least one of which has a subordinate clause. The main clauses are joined by either a coordinating conjunction or a semicolon.

Main Clause                           Subordinate Clause                           Main Clause
Gina Knew                              that she would have to wait,                but she didn’t mind

Main Clause                           Subordinate Clause                           Main Clause
Carl was surprised                   when he was chosen;                          he had never expected to win






Basic Sentence Patterns for Simple sentences:
N-V
N-V-DO
N-V-IO-DO
N-LV-N
N-LV-Adj

A Compound Sentence can combine any of the basic sentence patterns listed above.





Exercises

Exercise #1
Write a sentences for the following patterns:

1.       N-V, (fanboys) N-V-DO


2.      N-LV-Adj, (fanboys) N-LV-Adj


3.       N-V (sub conj) N-V

4.       (Subord conj), N-V-DO
Exercise #2
Identifying the Kinds of Sentences. For each sentence, underline the subject once and the verb twice; circle and coordinating and subordinating conjunctions.  Write S (Simple), Com (Compound), Cx (Complex) or C-C to show what kind of sentence it is.

1.      These jogging shoes are canvas and suede. __________
2.      You can fix the bell, or I can call the electrician. __________
3.      We picked the apples ourselves and baked a pie. __________
4.      The reporter asked if she could arrange an interview. __________
5.      People spend one third of their lives asleep. __________
6.      Before lunch, we will pick fresh vegetables from the garden.  __________
7.      The mysterious burglary has finally been solved, and justice will now be served. __________
8.      Because the union met with its members, they accepted the contract.  __________
9.      The rescue worker explained what the situation was.  __________
10.  As she presented the awards, the principal congratulated us.  __________
11.  My cat sleeps on the sofa if the sun is shining.  __________
12.  Even though the car is low on gas, and my bike tire is flat, I can still get to my meeting.  ______
13.  You will get ahead if you say the right things.  __________
14.  The boss called everyone into his office, but two people couldn’t make it.  __________
Exercise #3
Analyzing Compound-Complex Sentences.  Underline each main clause once and each subordinate clause twice.  Circle the subordinating conjunctions.



1.      Pam knew where the park was, and she gave us directions.
2.      After our team won, we decided to celebrate, so we led a parade through town.
3.      When the committee met, witnesses testified about poor living conditions, and experts suggested improvements.
4.      Sharon has been studying piano since she was six years old, and she enjoys it.
5.      Greg said that we should start without him, but we waited anyway.
6.      The bookstore ordered the items that Tim requested, and he is waiting for them.
7.      The sale items were so popular that they were gone in an hour, and the manager agreed                       to order more.
8.      Scientists have identified the agents that cause the disease, but they haven’t found a                           cure for it.
9.      The actor was nervous before he auditioned; he felt that he did well, though.
10.  Since the rain stopped, the game can be resumed; our team is ahead.


Friday, March 25, 2016

Writing 2 Class Notes -- Week 9 (March 24)

Greetings!  

On Thursday when I drove up to CHAT, the back roads were ice-covered and a little treacherous.  By the time classes were done, the snow had almost all melted.  That's Spring in Minnesota for you!

I used two dates and two men as the prompts for this week's Quick Write.  The first was March 23, 1776 when Patrick Henry proclaimed to the citizens of Richmond, Virginia, "I know not what course others may take; but as for me, give me liberty of give me death!"  The second date was March 25, 2228, the supposed birth date of Captain James T. Kirk, born somewhere in Iowa.  This man's mission was "to boldly go where no man has gone before."  I asked the students to write either about passions they would give their all to or about a life's adventure or dream.

For our Words of the Day, we had words that contained all of the vowels (a, e, i, o, and u):
armigerous -- entitled to bear heraldic arms; an armour-bearer
epuration -- purification; removing officials or politicians considered to be disloyal
inquorate -- unable to proceed due to an insufficient number of members
ossuaries -- a container or room in which the bones of dead people are placed
uvarovite -- an emerald green variety of a garnet
sequioia -- a redwood tree

Students handed in the Final Drafts of their Problem/Solution or Cause/Effect Essays. They worked hard on these and should pat themselves on the backs.  Their writing improves with each essay!

I introduced our next writing assignment: an Evaluation Essay.  In an essay of this type, students can take a current issue, a product, a place, a business, or a performance and evaluate it using criteria explained in the essay and supporting their opinions with specific facts and data.  I choose this essay to be the last one for Writing 2 because it uses bits of the other types of essays that we've written this year and in Writing 1 (description, process, comparison, etc.).  In class we specifically discussed forming good thesis statements and developing criteria with which to assess the quality or value of their subjects.  The Pre-Writes for these essays are due when we get back from break.

In the Grammar section of class we reviewed direct objects and indirect objects.  Students gave some sample sentences, and we dissected the sentences, labeling the parts of speech.  Since we are on the topic of Sentence Patterns, we proceeded on to Predicate Nouns and Predicate Adjectives.  The four patterns we've discussed so far are:
N - V - DO (noun - verb - direct object)
N - V - IO - DO (noun - verb - indirect object - direct object)
N - LV - N (noun - linking verb - noun)
N - LV - Adj (noun - linking verb - adjective)

We took a little longer with the Writing and Grammar portion of the class and only had time to discuss one of the short stories, "A Pair of Silk Stockings."  This has always been one of my favorites because the interpretations that students have vary so greatly.  Some read the story and claim the mother is selfish and foolish; others feel compassion for the mother.  Follow the link to the 007Mom post and read the story for yourselves.  Let me know what you think.

For our next class period, students will need to read the short stories for April 7 along with the stories for February 18.  The are listed below.

Assignments for April 7:
-- News Story Pre-Write
-- Predicate Nominative and Predicate Adjective Worksheets
-- Indirect Object Worksheet for extra credit
-- Read the following short stories:  
     -- February 18:  Pushkin (p. 162); Tolstoy (p. 169); Chekhov (p. 26)
     -- April 7:  Pirandello (p. 149); de Maupassant (p. 134)
-- Write 3 Discussion Questions for 3 of the short stories 

Links for This Week:
Class Notes
A Malefactor (audio)


We do not have class next week!  Enjoy the break, and be blessed this Easter!
Mrs. Prichard

Evaluation Essay

Evaluation Essay

Definition
            In an essay of evaluation, a writer acts like a roving critic, exploring the significance of your topic.  The purpose of an evaluation essay is to demonstrate the overall quality (or lack thereof) of a particular product, business, place, service, or program.  To develop an essay of this type, think in terms of a subject’s value, impact, and significance; its strengths and weaknesses; its place in the scheme of things.

Choosing a Subject
            An Evaluation Essay explores a particular event, a current trend, an extended project, a recent decision, a new product, and so on.  Consider recent experiences, conversations, and headlines for possible ideas.  It can focus on current events, political or social events, or developments in medicine or technology.

Thesis Development
While any evaluation involves injecting some form of opinion, if an evaluation is done properly, it should not come across as opinionated.  Instead, the evaluation should seem reasoned and unbiased. 

Organization
In order to give a clear representation and reasonable, unbiased discussion of your topic keep the following elements in mind:
  • Critera – This refers to the elements or qualities that demonstrate an ideal for any similar situation.  Having clear criteria establishes your paper with facts and details so that it does not appear to be only an opinion.  For example, if evaluating a restaurant, you would choose the common characteristics of menu items, cleanliness, staff, prices, etc. 
  • Judgment – This establishes whether or not your topic meets the appropriate criteria that you’ve chosen to consider in your evaluation.  Using the example of a restaurant, if you’ve chosen as criteria the quality of food, the judgment states whether or not the particular restaurant offers food that meets or exceeds this stated quality.
  • Evidence – These are the details that support your judgment of the criteria.  Again, in the restaurant example, if you have determined that the quality does not meet a certain standard, give an explanation that serves as evidence.

Generally, each body paragraph of an evaluation essay is going to focus on one specific criterion, which should be fully explained, followed by the judgment and a variety of evidence offered as support.  Because of this, it is important that any evaluation contains several different criteria, judgments, and evidence.

Essay Guidelines
Due dates:  Pre-Write due April 7; Rough Draft due April 14;  Final Draft due April 21
Essay length:  800 – 1000 words (between 3 and 6 pages)
Rough drafts can be typed or hand-written, but must be double-spaced.
Final draft format:
Typed (if this is not possible, please let me know)
1 inch margins
Name and date on the upper right hand corner
Number the pages on the lower right hand corner

Title centered above the text of the essay